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WordiGirl's avatar

I think I'm glad I hadn't fully read your stuff until now. I like that you have really stepped into your own, unafraid and unhindered. Much success to you with the rewrites and I'm looking forward to seeing Wendell in action! He seems like a very charming, clumsy, but loveable character. <3

Joseph Vickery's avatar

I’m glad Wendell has such a good wingman (you know the one that says “He’s very... VERY punchable. But his hearts in a great place” 👍)

Anyway I think Wendell is greatly written in terms of relatability. I thoroughly approve of making his age closer to target audience. And let’s be honest everyone deals with bullies. Bullies often are bullied themselves then just have a stupid copping mechanism. And every one wants to be more than they are now. (Not everyone dreams of being a hero per say) but everyone wants to be greater. Great job. This kid is worth exploring and finding out what he’s made of.

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