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Deleyna Marr's avatar

I'm very curious about the girl. Maybe she has some of her mother's gifts. I keep wanting Wendell to come into his own, but it is good the way he's learning slowly. At least he has his books again!

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Jaime Buckley πŸ’Ž's avatar

You know what I find challenging writing a serial?

Readers want the faster pace in development.

I wonder if that's because there is a week between installments. If this were a novel you were reading and Wendell developed as fast as my subscribers wanted him to, a novel reader would likely say, "That pacing's too fast..."

...think so?

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Deleyna Marr's avatar

I think it is actually perfect. In a novel, we'd just stay up all night reading. That anticipation and eagerness is just how that plays out in a serial, I think.

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