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Shannon W Haynes's avatar

I love the map, and the symbols make a lot of sense — the book should be in comic book form. It’s not only what you do, it’s how you write, in my opinion. One thing to consider (or not): The drawings currently introducing most of the episodes are adorable and not the least bit scary — for little kids. Is there a way to go somewhere in between your usual polished comic style and the more “silly” look of the sketches. The ape is not too scary in the sketch, for example, but it could use more definition (and color) to conform to your usual style. Either way, I’m sure I’ll pick up a copy when it’s available.

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Joseph Vickery's avatar

I alove watching concepts and designing in art! Speed drawings sketches and design processes. And that foreshortened hand… very nice.

I only have one gripe (which I think will mostly be fixed when it’s finished) is there is little to go off of for a sense of scale. Without focusing on it for a second you get the impression a boy is getting chased by a giant gorilla (you know a king kong like character). Again I think this will be mostly if not completely fixed once the leaves are added to reference scale… anyway just what was going through my mind.

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