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Wezley Of Mearth's avatar

Sorry, Jamie, I meant to try to answer this sooner, so I hope I’m not too late.

I see there are updates to the art on the cover… But I’ll post here what I answered about the first version, first. Likely won’t make a difference.

1. Love all the fonts! Notable detail: I was wondering if the gem couldn’t be blue like your logo?

2. I think your concept for the beaten and bruised :-) is PERFECT, but I had to think about it in thumbnail size and from across the room, when you can’t see it clearly… What would that look like? And I wondered if the specific swollen lip shape could not quite so closely matched the shape of the swollen eye… Because somehow it gave me the impression of the face being attacked by some sort of bug because the two looks so similar. Adore the idea and everything about it! That’s my only comment.

3. Although I have to admit, I made no connection to smoke, I also adored the look of the back cover, bleed into the black… Which to me in thumbnail size looked like the worn edges of a page… But I LOVED it! So what’s wrong with that? Wouldn’t change a thing. (I see some trailing smoke tails in an update? I loved the first way, but you’ll make everything look good so…)

4. Colour contrast is great to my mind! (And I already know from my incoming covers that artwork shows up different shades and vibrancy on each different screen and computer. So you’ll have a much better idea than I could!) I had imagined it might be too stark when you first mentioned it… But I don’t think so now with the touches of red, yellow and orange in the wounds. I think it works exactly as you wanted it too! Afterthought: maybe the Band-Aid could be a smidge bigger to be seen across the room. That really helps.

5. Love the texture! I think it brings everything together and makes it look super professional! (And hate that word by the way, but just saying! ;-))

6. Overall, the publisher info looks and works great! I think the Life of Fiction in the middle feels maybe a little too bit close to the QR code square? But I especially noticed the promo of the podcast and ADORE it. More lines or shading on the mic? Don’t care. Pretty perfect! 👍 🤩🏋️🤗👏👏👏❤️✨👋

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Dre Beltrami's avatar

Kindreds, baby!! 🥰 They clearly have the solid gold feedback for you here. This HERE is why I swear by co-creating with my kindreds.

I'm soooooo excited for YOU, that this is almost ready to come out. You know the vision... take your time, it's just building anticipation.

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