I liked it and certainly might be worth binge reading, again. I'm a little like ole Butterbur, from Lord of the Rings, "where given enough time, I can see through walls," so at times I wasn't exactly sure what was going on (or why it was going on, maybe). But, you maintained the emotional voice and that kept it together for me. Thanks for the story!
Hope you had a good Christmas & wish you the best in the new year.
Christmas was lovely...and I hope yours was lovely as well?
This story was an experiment.
Won't know if I carried it off well enough until I get enough feedback, but I loved writing it and wanted to share some new sides to my oldest characters from Chronicles.
If you read it again...and you get something new from it, then I believe I'll be closer to what I originally intended.
What a wonderful Christmas story! Merry Christmas to you and yours!
I liked it and certainly might be worth binge reading, again. I'm a little like ole Butterbur, from Lord of the Rings, "where given enough time, I can see through walls," so at times I wasn't exactly sure what was going on (or why it was going on, maybe). But, you maintained the emotional voice and that kept it together for me. Thanks for the story!
Hope you had a good Christmas & wish you the best in the new year.
Thank you, Neil!
Christmas was lovely...and I hope yours was lovely as well?
This story was an experiment.
Won't know if I carried it off well enough until I get enough feedback, but I loved writing it and wanted to share some new sides to my oldest characters from Chronicles.
If you read it again...and you get something new from it, then I believe I'll be closer to what I originally intended.
=)